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雅思寫作如何寫出高分好的作文?
- 2025年8月1日
- 文章來自: dgukedu
- 分類: 雅思備考
雅思寫作如何寫出高分好的作文?下面小編給大家分享幾點寫出高分作文的方法技巧,希望可以幫到正在雅思備考中的你。
在雅思寫作的議論文中,一般提議遵照introduction-body-conclusion(前言段-行為主體段-依據(jù)段)的“三步曲”。Body(主體)語段出示了論述見解的原因,是全部稿子的行為主體,在得分中占據(jù)挺大的比例。
比如9分雅思作文得分就規(guī)定:
presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas
當你問,什么是fully extended / well supported?就是說豐富的主體段。
即便是5分作文,也規(guī)定:
is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details
即一樣要主體語段豐富才行。
通常情況下,要雅思作文寫的好,最少必須帶有2個行為主體段,且每一行為主體段都務必有著確立的主題風格句即topic sentence,并有多個句supporting sentences,也就是說人們常說的事實論據(jù)與論點論據(jù)。提議在訓練議論文寫作時遵照好多個簡易的標準,就可以快速進行原因段,而且搭建連貫性和原因充足的議論文哦! 1.Write a topic sentence for each paragraph you plan to write. Each topic sentence should relate to your thesis statement and introduce what the paragraph will be about. If you find that the topics you want to discuss do not support the thesis statement you have written, revise your thesis statement or reconsider your topic sentences.
簡單來講,就是說每每段,必!須!有著1個確立的主題風格句,全部事實論據(jù)都緊緊圍繞這幾句進行,防止段兒偏題。
2.Write ideas that support your topic sentences. The topic sentence for each paragraph tells the reader what the paragraph will be about. The ideas stated in the rest of the paragraph should all relate to the topic sentence.
適用句務必緊緊圍繞主題風格句進行,考生們必須要留意這一點兒,假如偏題,那麼就會出現(xiàn)比較比較嚴重的罰分,那可真是哭都趕不及啦!
上例子:
例子看這里
Hobbies are important for many reasons. First, a hobby can be educational. For example, if the hobby is stamp collecting, the person can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history. Second, engaging in a hobby can lead to meeting other people with the same interests. A person can also meet other people by going to the school. Third, a person's free time is being used in a positive way. The person has no time to be bored or get into mischief while engaged in the hobby. Finally, some hobbies can lead to a future job. A person who enjoys a hobby-related job is more satisfied with life.
后面緊跟的First,second, third都是為了支持前面的第一句話。此外,在每一個點,又加入新的支持。比如在First句后面,又加了For example,來支持前面的觀點,這樣層層遞進,文章就看起來格外的脈絡清晰。這句中,很明顯主題句就是Hobbies are important for many reasons.
但本段也并非完美無瑕哦~ A person can also meet other people by going the school與hobby重要的原因沒有關系,因此削弱了整個段落的連貫性與統(tǒng)一性,應該被去掉。
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