東莞英凱教育(環(huán)球雅思分校)
雅思G類大作文考題分析-過度消費的利弊
- 2025年4月26日
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雅思G類大作文考題分析-過度消費的利弊,本期考題回憶來自2021年2月25日加拿大機考。本文就跟隨環(huán)球雅思小編一起來看看具體內容吧,希望這些內容對于你的備考能夠有所幫助!
考題回憶:Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society?
這道題也曾出現(xiàn)在2020年9月27日深圳機考。
以下范文來自eltecenglish.com,314words
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粗體為該題型常用表達,下劃線為話題詞匯。
學習方法建議:讀題-構思-對照范文看自己的ideas是否扣題-翻譯范文-對照譯文和范文積累話題詞匯。
In an era of materialism and consumerism, people are bombarded with new and exciting products. People engage in these goods not only because they appeal to human senses but also because they are advertised as necessary and indispensable. While this trend is harmful to the lives of individuals, it could bring benefits to society.
譯文:在物質主義和消費主義的時代,人們每天接觸大量新的令人激動的產品。人們喜歡這些東西不只因為它們刺激著感官,而且廣告里說它們說必要必需的。雖然這個趨勢對個人有害,但對社會有好處。
Consumers purchase the products they do not need due to intensive advertisingby large companies with deep marketing budgets. Regular advertisements displayed on various media often influence people unconsciously into believing that the products being advertised are necessary. For instance, corporates like Hewlett Packard spend billions of dollars on advertisements every year to sell laptops and computers. Moreover, people tend to purchase products that appeal to their senses and desires. Companies create items which have superior finish and appearance to attract customers. For example, a recent research revealed that more than 50 percent mobile phone buyers preferred Apple’s iPhone not because of its functions but because of its appealing touch and shape.
譯文:有著雄厚營銷預算大企業(yè)密集地做廣告,這是消費者買自己不需要的產品的原因。各種媒體上常見的廣告不經意就對人們產生了印象,讓他們認為廣告里的產品是必要的。例如,像惠普這種公司每年花上百萬在筆記本和電腦的廣告上。而且,人們會買那些刺激感官和購物欲的東西。企業(yè)會研發(fā)外觀漂亮的產品來吸引消費者。比如,最近的一項研究發(fā)現(xiàn),50%的手機消費者更喜歡iPhone,不是因為功能,而是因為手感和外形。
詞匯替換:products = goods = items; consumers = people = buyers; advertising = advertisements = being advertised.
Engaging in extreme consumerism has several negative impacts ranging from an increase in individual debt to lack of focus on more important things. A 2014 study in the United Kingdom revealed that many Britishers spend more on television and mobile phone services than on food and education. This has increased household debt and compromised nutrition and intellectual development of the citizens. However, such spending is the primary reason behind decades of healthy growth rates in various countries. As people purchase more goods and services, a country’s gross domestic product increases and so does the job rate.
譯文:身陷過度消費主義有幾種負面影響,從個人債務上升到缺乏對更重要事物的關注。英國2014年的一項研究表明,很多英國人花更多時間在電視和手機而不是食品和教育上。這導致了家庭負債的增加以及公民的營養(yǎng)和智力發(fā)展狀況的下降。但是,這類支出正是幾十年來各國經濟持續(xù)發(fā)展的主要原因。人們買更多產品和服務,GDP就會增加,就業(yè)率也是一樣。
詞匯替換:individual debt = househol debt, people = citizens, products和services拓展為television, mobile phone, food, education.用“食品和教育”拓展中心句里的“更重要事物”??傆X得沒話說的G友注意了,對題目關鍵詞進行具體化,是提升回答詳盡程度(TR表現(xiàn))的有效方法。
In conclusion, increasing consumption of items that people do not need is due to strong marketing by various companies. This has resulted in lower savings and lesser expenditure on necessary things. Governments should not only make people aware of the adverse effects of such behaviour but also regulate the advertisement of products.
譯文:總之,不必要物品消費的增加是由于企業(yè)的強力營銷。這導致了低存款和必要物品支出不足,政府不僅應該讓人們意識到這種行為的壞處,還應該規(guī)范廣告。
詞匯替換:前文的“債務”=lower savings, 前文的“缺乏對更重要事物關注”=lesser expenditure on necessary things,這種上下文的呼應可以大幅提升CC表現(xiàn),同時使用了比較級,提升語法表現(xiàn)。目標7+G友在學習范文過程中應有這種意識。