? ? ? ? 托福作文中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的病句修改。托福作文中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)病句，在根據(jù)中國考生的習(xí)慣本文特意為大家整理的常見病句及修改，希望對(duì)各位考生有所幫助：

　　1.?The?artist’s?work?pushes?our?civilization?to?a?higher?level。

　　改進(jìn)：Artists’?work?upgrades?our?civilization。

　　2.?For?example，?you?work?in?a?big?factory。

　　改進(jìn)：?Suppose?you?work?in?a?big?factory。

　　3.?You’ll?find?you?are?fit?for?business?and?you?can?make?it?your?main?job。

　　改進(jìn)：You’ll?find?that?you?are?cut?out?for?business?and?you?can?make?it?your?career。

　　4.?We?will?own?nothing?at?all?if?we?depend?on?luck。

　　改進(jìn)：?We?will?get?nowhere?if?we?rely?on?luck。

　　5.?He?will?get?a?higher?salary?to?improve?his?living?level。

　　改進(jìn)：?He?will?get?a?higher?salary，?thus?improving?his?life。

　　6.?Their?brain?is?still?very?young。

　　改進(jìn)：?They?are?still?immature。

　　7.?Dissatisfaction?makes?people?produce?desire?for?better?things。

　　改進(jìn)：?Dissatisfaction?impels?people?for?the?better。

　　8.?They?can’t?analyze?clearly?what?is?right?and?what?is?wrong。

　　改進(jìn)：?They?cannot?tell?right?from?wrong。

　　9.?It?will?help?children?to?form?a?good?habit?of?dealing?with?time。

　　改進(jìn)：?It?will?help?children?learn?to?make?good?use?of?time。

　　10.?Though?it?is?not?the?best?job，?it?afford?to?his?life。

　　改進(jìn)：?Though?it?is?not?the?best?job，?a?job?is?a?job.?He?can?make?ends?meet?with?it。

　　11.?Since?people?are?always?not?satisfied?with?their?present?situation，?they?want?further?development。

　　改進(jìn)：?Since?people?are?never?satisfied?with?their?status?quo，?they?want?further?development。

　　12.?The?only?thing?they?need?to?do?is?to?find?a?job?which?can?easily?get?big?money。

　　改進(jìn)：?The?only?thing?they?need?to?do?is?to?find?a?job?that?can?bring?them?big?money。

　　13.?They?like?an?active?life?but?not?a?peaceful?life。

　　改進(jìn)：?They?like?an?active?life?rather?than?a?peaceful?one。