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2020年雅思寫(xiě)作大分作文集錦
- 2025年4月26日
- 文章來(lái)自: dgukedu
- 分類(lèi): 雅思備考
雅思寫(xiě)作一直都是考生們備考的關(guān)鍵,為了方便烤鴨們雅思備考,今天環(huán)球雅思培訓(xùn)老師整理了2020年雅思大分作文集錦,優(yōu)秀的范文對(duì)于初備雅思寫(xiě)作的考生幫助是相當(dāng)大的,考生們能從范文里理解寫(xiě)作思路,形成自己的寫(xiě)作風(fēng)格。
2020年雅思大分作文集錦:
Whenacountrydevelopsitstechnology,thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflifedieout.Itispointlesstotryandkeepthemalive.To
whatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?
官方給出的大分答案
Idisagreewiththeopinionexpressed.Iwouldliketobeginbypointingoutthattraditionalskillsandwaysoflifearenotautomaticallyofonecountry,butofacultureorcommunity.Inmanyways,thehistoryofcivilizationisthehistoryoftechnology:fromthediscoveryoffiretotheinventionofthewheeltothedevelopmentoftheInternet,wehavebeenmovingonfrompreviouswaysofdoingthings.Sometechnologies!
Overall,Idisagreewiththeopinionexpressed.(首句話(huà)里作者直接說(shuō)出了自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn),這有點(diǎn)主要是區(qū)別在中國(guó)學(xué)生通常所使用的背景開(kāi)頭方式,但它在這個(gè)開(kāi)頭里同樣使用了兩個(gè)中國(guó)學(xué)生不大使用的結(jié)構(gòu),一個(gè)是overall,另外一個(gè)是過(guò)去分詞做后置定語(yǔ),既expressed)Iwouldliketobeginbypointingoutthattraditionalskillsandwaysoflifearenotautomaticallyofonecountry,butofacultureorcommunity.(作者在此所提出的觀(guān)點(diǎn)很犀利,并且使用的結(jié)構(gòu)也是相當(dāng)不錯(cuò)的,大家現(xiàn)在能看看,Iwouldliketodo我想做…,這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)是中國(guó)學(xué)生都十分熟悉的,但他隨后使用的bydoing便比較的標(biāo)新立異,后面他又使用了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句,如此的結(jié)構(gòu)顯得更加豐滿(mǎn)。并且作者對(duì)于標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用也是很具有特色的,其中的符號(hào)確實(shí)起到了加強(qiáng)的作用,大家后面需要注意對(duì)于標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用。而其中的連詞but雖然不是很難,但使用卻相當(dāng)?shù)暮谩?/p>
Modernbuildingsareappearinginlargenumbersbutsomepeoplebelievethatweshouldbuildourbuildingsintraditionalstyles.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
Inrecentyears,aninterestingtrendhasemerged.Countrieswithlonghistoriesandrichcultureshavebeenmodernizingthequickest,especiallyintermsofarchitecture.Manyhavecriticizedthisasnotrespectingtraditionalculture.Whiletraditionalarchitectureshouldbeprotected,Ifeelitisnotnecessarytostopbuildingmodernstructuresaswemoveforward.
Onereasonforthisisthatmodernbuildingsaremorepracticalandcomfortabletoliveandworkin.Whiletraditionalbuildingsmightlooknicefromtheoutside,theyareoftennotveryuser-friendly.Modernbuildingsusuallyhavelotsofwindowsandlightandarecleanandenergyefficient.Surelythiswillmakethoseinsidethemhappier.
Anotherpointtoconsideristhatmodernbuildingswillgiveagoodimpressiontothosevisitingfromabroad.ConsiderBeijingduringtheOlympicsifwedon’tcontinuetoexplorenewbuildingstyleswewon’tbeabletoletfuturegenerationsknowwhatourperiodofhistorywaslike.
Individualscandonothingtoimprovetheenvironment;
anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutenvironmentalprotectionandregarditasoneofthemostimportantchallenges.However,whetheronlygovernmentsandbigfirmshaveresourcesandpowerstopreserveourenvironmentisacontroversialissue.Myviewisthateverysinglecitizencouldalsomakeahugedifference.,localauthoritiesandorganizationsmustshouldertheirresponsibilitytodeveloplow-carboneconomyatthemacrolevel.Onlybydoingsocanweassurethatwecouldhandthisbeautifulplanettoournextgenerationandthenextgenerationafter.
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