托福作文中常遇到的錯(cuò)誤
- 2025年4月26日
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? ? ? ? 托福作文大家都過不少參考書而且背誦了不少好段子,但還是有非常多的考生托福分?jǐn)?shù)不理想,下面就來看看東莞托福培訓(xùn)的小編rain是如何評(píng)點(diǎn)托福寫作的常見錯(cuò)誤的。
一.句子不完好Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get sintos college. For example, my friend in high school.句子中沒有需要主語(yǔ)、次要?jiǎng)釉~,其實(shí)它應(yīng)是一個(gè)
從句。這是一個(gè)十分常見的毛病,修改的辦法是將兩個(gè)句子銜接起來。
二.介詞過剩I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to
the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表現(xiàn)這種意思時(shí)此單詞不克不及與介詞連用。這種狀況罕見于downtown,home
,there,here等詞。這些詞語(yǔ)在英語(yǔ)中是副詞而非名詞,因此不克不及在它們后面添加介詞。
三.書寫難以識(shí)別信息不準(zhǔn)確I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.傳的信息不準(zhǔn)確,或許讓人聽起來認(rèn)為能夠不準(zhǔn)確(假如的確是準(zhǔn)確的,該當(dāng)說明
為什么如許,由于讀者不以為是準(zhǔn)確的)。上述例句中,all的意思是百分之百;我們不克不及相對(duì)地說每一件新器械多是從美國(guó)降生的。為保險(xiǎn)起見,該當(dāng)運(yùn)用many或most。非英語(yǔ)單詞Computers are
very helpful and advantageable.雖然看起來象個(gè)單詞,其實(shí)不是,至多不是個(gè)英文單詞。運(yùn)用這個(gè)單詞的另一種方式。
四.不要運(yùn)用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got sintos bed. Get太不正式,意思也過于模糊,不合適用在正式的場(chǎng)所。應(yīng)將get改為一個(gè)愈加詳細(xì)的單詞,如become,
receive, find, achieve,等等。
五.構(gòu)造不屈行例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞將一系列的單詞聯(lián)接起來的時(shí)分,該當(dāng)運(yùn)用詞性相反或統(tǒng)一類型的短語(yǔ)。
六.段落過長(zhǎng),不分段主語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞分歧成績(jī)She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主語(yǔ)和動(dòng)詞在數(shù)方面紛歧致。
七.不知所云例:Many companies began using computers mouth.
八.句子別扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辭過長(zhǎng)或不清。換言之,句子顯得詼諧好笑。
九.關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)反復(fù)出現(xiàn)Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不可以在該句的次要主語(yǔ)和次要?jiǎng)釉~前運(yùn)用連詞。
十.萬(wàn)萬(wàn)不要運(yùn)用縮寫在正式的寫作中不要運(yùn)用縮寫方式(can’t,don’t,it’s,we’ll,they’ve等等),該運(yùn)用單詞的完好方式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。
上面這些就是東莞托福培訓(xùn)的小編rain給你大家總結(jié)的托福作文中常見十條錯(cuò)誤,大家可以參照自己的情況看看自己犯了哪些錯(cuò)誤,再對(duì)應(yīng)的改進(jìn)。最后東莞托福培訓(xùn)小編祝大家托福備考順利!